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Where are you going? by ilolamai

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Absolutely excellent job! You've really applied the detail in a professional and very presentable way. I would have used more spectral, futuristic colours if I were to do something similar as oppose to this 90's esuqe style (this is especially with the car interior, her style of swimsuit + manual gears), but that's just me =P. I like extreme originality instead of basic my work of existing aesthetics.

Her old style car and fingerless gloves reminds me a lot of Misato Katsuragi from Neon Genesis Evangelion.

Improvements [Gosh.. if any..]:
>Her sandals/thongs (aussie slang here xD) could use a touch more well proportional work.

>The droplets are a little too prominent, it really gives the impression she's sopping wet. But this may be down to your personal choices for this work, plus judging by the title and her gloves they may as well be in a rushing, action situation.

Other than that, your ability to apply crisp original details outdo my current abilities.
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ilolamai Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012
Thank you very much for your compliment,critique and suggestion.I will remember that.And i will try to do better next time.

I didn't think about Misato but i thought about my father's gloves.He always wore it when he drove.But that's 10 years ago^^
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